ON THE NOTE (from personal experience and my observations of the creativity of the authors stihi.ry). If you want your poems to like readers, then
1. Do not start "from afar", let the first line be your advertisement - try to interest the reader.
2. Do not distract the reader from the topic. Whatever it was, it was realistic or abstract, or even if it was not even there. Try to write something integral. Close your eyes and imagine the general impression of what you created. Remove unnecessary, add the missing.